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“AlmaMia Cienfuegos” tells a story where blood deceives, nightmares rot, and sisters wage war on each other.
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“AlmaMia Cienfuegos” tells a story where blood deceives, nightmares rot, and sisters wage war on each other.
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“Old
magic sings in the blood of the Cienfuegos women, binding them together as much
as it pushes them apart. Accusations fly as quickly as tears flow, and
conciliation is tentatively brokered before shattering. The reader is left to
determine which magic will triumph.” ~ Notes from the Underground
Excerpt
“Not
for the feint hearted, this short story is a roller-coaster ride of intense
emotion wrapped in the snotty hanky of a small child.” ~ Daydream Believer
“…we
are introduced to the Cienfuegos family, under whose fractured veneer of
civility and familial bonds lies a seething, roiling mass of conflict, abuse,
jealousy, rage, and denial.” ~ KimR
“You
will [be] finishing this story wishing you could bring AlmaMia home with you.”
~ Lilac Wolf and Stuff
AlmaMia was seven the night she shaved her fourteen-year-old sister’s left eyebrow while the older sibling slept. Soledad hadn’t talked to her in two days, and AlmaMia was not going to ask for forgiveness. In her mind, Soledad had been the one to start all the trouble.
The afternoon
prior to the shaving incident, Soledad and a couple of her friends from school
had ambushed AlmaMia in the woods. She had been leaving Miss Toledo’s cabin
when her sister and the other teenagers pushed her against a coconut tree and
tickled her armpits until her underwear and legs got wet and warm. Mamabuela
had been out of town attending a funeral, and Miss Toledo had gone to a meeting
at Cienfuegos Boarding School where she worked as a librarian. AlmaMia tried
getting back into Miss Toledo’s place to clean up, but her teacher’s doors were
locked. The girl was forced to run to Vanesa’s house in shoes full of piss.
Moisture, heat
and pressure weakened the cement glue that kept the top of AlmaMia’s shoes
attached to their soles. The right shoe came apart. AlmaMia wanted to hide the
split from Vanesa, but her mother caught her before she could sneak into the
house. When Vanesa grabbed her by the hair, AlmaMia shut her eyes and covered
her mouth with both hands. Vanesa always hit harder and longer if AlmaMia
cried. That day, Vanesa took her favorite machete sheath and beat AlmaMia on
the ribs and thighs only four times.
The leather scabbard
bruised the side of AlmaMia’s right thigh. AlmaMia swore to herself that she
would tell Mamabuela about the beating. But after the pain began to lessen, she
realized she would also have to explain shaving off Soledad’s eyebrow with a
crafting blade Mamabuela kept in her do-not-touch box. Instead of concocting an
accusation plan, AlmaMia returned the double edged blade to the box and grabbed
a small bottle of her grandmother’s homemade arnica oil. After a couple of
rubs, during a two-day period, the oil had taken care of the pain and most of
the marks. Mamabuela’s herbal remedy had worked so well that AlmaMia was no
longer angry at her mother or at her sister.
“Are you
almost done ironing, Soledad?” Her sister continued pressing a blue skirt as if
AlmaMia hadn’t spoken. If she wasn’t such
an ass she would’ve checked if Mamabuela had something to make eyebrow hair
grow back faster, AlmaMia thought before sighing and wishing Soledad’s
ironing would take a very long time.
If she didn’t
finish her homework before her sister was done, Vanesa wouldn’t let her go with
Soledad and Matías, her father’s best friend, to a fiesta de palos at Miss Toledo’s cabin. AlmaMia was trying to
complete the assignment, but her brain couldn’t think of any more
three-syllable words that named people, things, or places which were hostile.
She grabbed her head with both hands and wondered, How does Miss Toledo come up with these stupid homework ideas?
“Vanesa,”
AlmaMia said to her mother. “What if I spell nine words and then tell you five
aloud? That’s more, isn’t it?” She crossed her fingers under the table and
waited.
“Write ten,”
Vanesa said without looking up from the dress she had been mending.
AlmaMia looked
at her wrist and willed the charms hanging from her silver bracelet to give her
some inspiration. The small frog and the happy skull stared back at her without
answers. Her third charm, a book-shaped infuser filled with rosemary leaves
from Mamabuela’s garden, smelled like her grandmother’s hugs at dinnertime, but
the scent didn’t trigger any words.
She scratched
the top of her head with a pencil and searched around Vanesa’s living room for
ideas; nothing useful on the packed dirt floor, the zinc roof, or the unpainted
small window that let in the night breeze and every mosquito in the Dominican
Republic. AlmaMia stared at Soledad’s pale face and bulging eye, and was
wondering how to spell piranha, when something tapped her foot.
Matías was
pointing at the table. AlmaMia perked up; her father’s best friend always came
up with the best games. She followed his index finger to the cover of the comic
book he had been reading, and copied the last word in the title: Araña. She didn’t think the eight-legged
weavers were particularly hostile, but Vanesa ran screaming whenever she saw
one. Maybe Miss Toledo would think of Vanesa’s blaring, and see spiders as mean
creatures.
After writing
the word, AlmaMia winked at Matías. Then she danced in circles around Vanesa’s
rocking chair. “I’m done, I’m done, I’m done, I’m done, I’m done!” She squealed.
“Ten mean words with three syllables in them.” She planted the notebook on
Vanesa’s lap.
“Cheat.” The
sound of Soledad’s voice made AlmaMia want to poke her sister’s browless
eyeball.
Vanesa stopped
sewing. “Did you cheat, AlmaMia?”
AlmaMia stared
at her feet, paying special attention to the way the blackened nail of her left
big toe stuck out of her faded pink flip-flop, before she glanced back and
forth between Vanesa, Soledad, and the toe.
“Matías gave
her a word.” Soledad’s hazel eyes shined brighter than the coals she had been
using to heat up the iron.
“Did you help
her, Matías?” Vanesa cocked her head towards the man.
Matías stood
up to talk to AlmaMia’s mother. “Yes Vanesa, but Mia was only missing one word.
I just—”
“Soledad,”
Vanesa cut him off, “You can go to the party with Matías after you’re done
pressing that skirt. AlmaMia will stay with me studying her words.” Vanesa went
back to her needling.
AlmaMia
wailed.
“You didn’t
have to do that,” Matías said to Soledad.
“Someone needs
to keep her from becoming a brat,” Soledad said, grinning at her little sister.
AlmaMia
shrieked louder.
Matías walked
away from Soledad and knelt next to AlmaMia. “All right, Mia, it’s all right.”
He unstuck a patch of wet curls from the little girl’s face and patted her
right cheek. “If you quit crying now, we can read Spider-Man together. There’s a lot of cool fighting in this comic
book. I bet I can help you find more hostile three-syllable words for your
homework.”
“Okay,”
AlmaMia whimpered, wiping her face with the front of her t-shirt.
In less than
half an hour, Matías taught AlmaMia how to spell serpiente, alimaña and piraña, the Spanish words for serpent,
vermin and piranha.
“I’ll be ready
in a minute,” Soledad told Matías. “I just have to put out the coals.”
“Leave them
burning,” Vanesa said. “I need to press this hem when I’m done fixing it.”
After setting
the iron in its metal cradle, Soledad stood, hands on hips, in front of Matías
and AlmaMia. “I’m ready to go,” she said.
“Give me a
second.” Matías looked up from Spider-Man.
“We only have five pages left. Can you believe Mia learned how to spell three
more hostile words already?”
“Four!”
AlmaMia yelled. “I learned how to spell Trujillo.”
Soledad rolled
her eyes. “Whatever. No one cares about some jerk that got shot to death thirty
years ago. Let’s get out of here before Mami changes her mind and we get stuck
with Little Shit,” she said to Matías.
“Many people
care about jerks.” AlmaMia stuck her tongue out at her sister. “You’re just
jealous because you repeated sixth grade this many times,” she held up three
fingers, “and I’m only in third grade and know more long mean words than you.”
AlmaMia saw Matías bite his lower lip to hide a grin and that made her giggle.
“Thirteen
words total, really?” Vanesa stopped the needle and extended a hand. “Let me
see.”
AlmaMia gave
the notebook to Vanesa and crossed her fingers and her legs, too.
Matías winked
at AlmaMia. “That was a lot of work,” he said to Vanesa in an exaggerated tone.
“I think Mia deserves a break. And I’m playing tonight. She hasn’t seen me hit
the drums in a long time.”
Soledad kicked
Matías on the side of the leg, and he dropped Spider-Man at AlmaMia’s feet.
Vanesa looked
up from the notebook, and aimed an index finger at AlmaMia’s face. “You can go,
but I’m testing you tomorrow before dinner. You need to become a doctor and
make lots of money, so you can buy me a big house.”
AlmaMia kissed
and hugged Vanesa with her eyes closed, and promised herself she would buy her
mother that big house one day. Gripping Soledad’s hand, she said, “Let’s go,
Sola.”
“Not before
you change that t-shirt.” Vanesa scrunched up her face. “You got snot all over
it.”
“I’ll get
another one.” Keeping her undershirt on, AlmaMia took off the dirty t-shirt
before going through the laundry basket that sat by the ironing board. She
slipped into a red blouse that had big white and yellow daisies on it. “I’m
ready,” she said and reached for Soledad, but her sister slapped her hand.
AlmaMia
stomped Soledad on the foot.
Soledad
smacked AlmaMia on the side of the head.
AlmaMia rubbed
her ear and glowered at her sister.
“Stop that,
you two.” Vanesa put her sewing on her lap, stared at AlmaMia and shook her
head. “Soledad, are you going to let your sister walk outside looking like
beasts live in this house? Put an iron to that top.”
AlmaMia pulled
the wrinkled blouse over her head and handed it to Soledad. “Iron it, drowned
cow.” She smirked at her sister. Soledad’s eyes were usually big and beautiful,
but the missing eyebrow made her left eyeball bulge so far out of her face that
AlmaMia expected it to jump out of its socket and knock somebody out.
Soledad
grabbed the blouse, and said to Matías, “I won’t forgive you for this one.”
AlmaMia hugged
Matías by the waist, and said, “I’ll forgive you for all the ones, in all the
worlds, and all the times.”
Matías smiled.
“I knew you were my favorite for a reason.” He ruffled AlmaMia’s wild hair.
She hugged him
tighter before letting go. Matías was like a brother to her father, and other
than letters and phone calls, he was AlmaMia’s only real connection to Papi.
“His favorite, his favorite, his favorite,” AlmaMia sang, danced, and laughed
in front of Soledad.
“AlmaMia
Cienfuegos,” Vanesa’s eyes were on her youngest daughter, but her needle was
still moving in and out of fabric that had been repaired too many times. “Stop
annoying your sister.”
AlmaMia
covered her mouth to stifle lingering giggles. She waited until Vanesa
refocused on the sewing before folding her undershirt all the way to the top of
her stomach. Then, standing in front of Soledad, tongue sticking out and hands
waving over her head, AlmaMia began rolling her belly around and around in one
of her favorite mocking dances.
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I have a feeling Alma will rise above it and will soon be teaching some 'lessons'....She will be the strong warrior!.
ReplyDeleteWe can only hope... ;-)
DeleteBought it...read it...loved it!!!!! Your story really makes me want to know more about the whole family. Left a review on Amazon uk :D XXX
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you liked it. And thanks sooo much for the review, for as you already know, those are the words that keep me writing more words ;-0
Deletebeen there...done that...LOVE it!!! =)
ReplyDeleteYou've put a HUGE smile on my face ;-D
DeleteI finally bought Almamia Cienfuegos and read it twice in a row while sipping on chardonnay with my toes wiggling in the sand. I love little Almamia, and want so badly to smoosh Soledad's face in a pile of dog poop. Are you going to put more work available for purchase/download, dear Witch? I'm absolutely in love with your writing.
ReplyDeleteSoledad seems to inspire dark organic feelings in a lot of people...
DeleteI'm thinking about having a few stories ready for publishing in April and then again in October. Right now, I'm working hard and long on Dancing on Her Bones.
I'm so glad you are "in love" ;-)