A
cancer scare hits hard
and fast, like a roller coaster,
it twists the gut
and leaves the heart feeling
displaced.
Those
terrible days—
the
ones that snail by
while
your flesh is waiting,
waiting…
to learn
if
bits of you are rotting inside
(rotting
again, in my case)—
those
days are soul eaters.
But
after
the
almost-apocalypse is done,
when
the healer chants,
“You’re
fine. You are just fine!”,
the
world grows bright:
flowers
bloom through snow,
flesh and
blood and bones relax,
the
spirit blossoms
anew.
photo by Evie S. – on Unsplash
- for Poets and Storytellers United (Writers’ Pantry #50: How Do You Take Your Notes?).
Such good news! I'm happy for you! And relieved, too.
ReplyDeleteI share your relief and then some!
DeleteBeautifully said, in words wonderfully chosen and arranged. It must indeed be a huge relief (particularly because of the 'again'). I know how I felt recently to learn that some troublesome symptoms are not due to any of the dire and dangerous conditions that might have been causing them, but merely a combination of ageing and overweight – but at least in my case no-one suggested cancer, which would have been even scarier. May you keep shining on, and blossoming exuberantly, for a long time to come!
ReplyDeleteI, too, am glad that your results weren't as scary as they could be.
DeleteAnd I send that last sentence right back at you! ❤️đ€
DeleteSadly as one adds on the years the body does tend to moan a bit here and there...well mine is moaning a lot but I blame my active sporty youth no doubt encouraging everything to start complaining now!
ReplyDeleteYou are so right, Robin. The older I get, the more annoyed my bones seem to grow. Maybe we can hold on to the memories of those active sporty years to help us get through the moaning.
DeleteBeautiful and what a huge relief or as in your wonderful words "the spirit blossoms anew" So happy for you
ReplyDeleteanew
Thank you, Marja.
DeleteYou are so pragmatic and yet poetic about your ‘almost-apoclalypse’, Magaly, and, as Rosemary said, it must be a huge relief to hear those words, put your heart back in its place, and continue to dance and sparkle – blossom anew – and that makes me very happy!
ReplyDeleteAnd your happy makes me happy! On the pragmatism bit, I find it that it helps. The alternative brings nothing but frustration.
Delete“You’re fine. You are just fine!” Maga, this is such great news. May your world continue to grow brighter and spirit blossoms anew! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Khaya.
DeleteHappy to hear of your healer's chant
ReplyDeleteHave a Blessed Sunday
much love...
Thank you, Gillena.
Deletethat's great news!
ReplyDeleteyes, the world grows brighter. :)
Thank you!
Delete*GIANT HUGS*
ReplyDeleteI'm so, so glad that things turned out OK. Now we all just have to make it through the winter. Here's hoping that you health trends in an upward direction!
Joining my hopes to yours!
DeleteHarrowing and uplifting at one and the same moment. Very happy for you!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Chrissa!
DeleteI'm doing the Joydance for your good news, AND for the fact that I got to read this really fine exposition. Happy Days, MG.
ReplyDeleteYay, for Joydancing!
DeleteWhat a relief. I like the "snail by" term.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen.
DeleteAnd I exhale ... an exhale of thanks you might feel way across the country.
ReplyDeleteI feel it!
DeleteBeautiful words, "You're fine. You are just fine." All the emotions put on hold while waiting let free again. How liberating. I too, like the "snail by" description of days slowed by waiting.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lisa.
DeleteBlessings on you, Magaly. Such good news, and so beautifully shared. May your "new" start bring all good things!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bev. And so mote it be!
Delete“flowers bloom through snow,
ReplyDeleteflesh and blood and bones relax,
the spirit blossoms
anew”
Beautiful.
Thank you, my sweetest Gina.
DeleteHearts and love and light and stars and balloons and loud music and cheering and .. and... finally, peace. Well, you know.
ReplyDeleteMoments of peace are the best!
DeleteOh, may the blossoming go on and on and on! Blessings to the healers, all of them!
ReplyDeleteBlessings to them!
DeleteGlad for you!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Priscilla.
DeleteWonderful news! I love 'spirit blossoms anew.' I am so happy for you.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hazel.
DeleteI do love a happy conclusion to a near-apoclalypse.
ReplyDeleteYou and me both! Let's hope 2021 brings more.
DeleteGood news ! It's a terrible time waiting for results.
ReplyDeleteIndeed! I've always felt that the waiting is more torturous than the rest.
DeleteThere is definitely a delicate, painful balance we must walk when waiting for medical news. You have expressed it brilliantly. Keep blooming
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susie. And I know you'll keep on blooming, too.
DeleteThis is good news! I enjoyed reading this poem and particularly admire the use of "snail" as a verb.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jenna.
DeleteYour last verse is the desired outcome, I am very happy for you. I liked best your summation of those feelings, "the spirit blossoms anew."
ReplyDeleteThank you again for the note taking blurb, and for visiting me.
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Thank you so much, Jim.
DeleteI'm crying!! Happy Dance!!! Love you Magaly!!! I am so happy!! BIG HUGS!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd I love you right back! I so hope we can do more of this dancing in the summer--or whenever things get safe enough for you to have your own health issues addressed. Sending you hugs!
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