So many hearts fellfor the silver in his tongue,for a mouth that licked mindsdazedbefore sinking teeth into flesh;every heartbut the one under her breast.She had tastedthe fakery that oozedout of the shine in his eyes,watched him sign contractswith the blood of shackled sheep,while sitting on the backsof the choice-robbedand the enthralled.She had wonderedif any of them would ever seethe muck that stuck to his bones,the worms that rotted the hollowsthat should’ve housed a soul;will they sense the incubusunder the wealth-made halo,or has he sucked all the marrowout of their future and wits?
for Poets and Storytellers United (Writers Pantry #6: And the Stars Make Love to the Universe)
Sunday, February 9, 2020
Under Her Breast
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Wow! Yes, many are too easily fooled. And to many seem to think wealth is a measure of trustworthiness, when it may be that it's the exact opposite.(Depends what people have done to become wealthy.) A very thought-provoking piece.
ReplyDeleteIt depends, indeed.
DeleteMay be she loved him truly and despite his short comings, her heart beat for him.
ReplyDeleteThat's a scary thought.
DeleteOh my, Magaly! The imagery in this poem is vivid and evocative, especially:
ReplyDelete‘…a mouth that licked minds
dazed
before sinking teeth into flesh’
and
‘the muck that stuck to his bones,
the worms that rotted the hollows
that should’ve housed a soul’.
Thank you, Kim!
DeleteSshhhh...Quiet, please; I'm listening to him speechify. Lie, lie, lie. Liar, lying. It's all he's capable of.
ReplyDelete*staying quiet... and not giggling at all*
DeleteThere are some things I can forgive or at least understand. But people who build empires exploiting the misery and fear of others will never have a drop of my pity. Ever.
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm right there with you.
DeleteWow! He sounds like the (perfect) seducer. Since none is able to see the heart under his breast
ReplyDeleteWishing you a happy Sunday Magaly
Much💝love
Let us hope that people are not too blind.
DeleteThe huckster that enthralls everyone is a person of the lowest form but is especially insidious when i comes to the heart. The one person who sees through the facade is usually the one despised.
ReplyDeleteThis is a reminder of the voice in the wilderness may not be in vain (eventually.)
Indeed. Instinct might be impulsive most of the time. But it can certainly help us survive.
DeleteWhile others heart's are tempted by what they see and hear, her heart can see through to what 'lies' beneath. There is nothing tempting there at all.
ReplyDeleteI agree. Not even one bit. The opposite, if I had to say.
DeleteThe questions in this make me want to know the answers; they tap the frustration of why the same surface, the same actions on the same screen, can read so impossibly opposite. And the horror of that is palpable.
ReplyDeleteMay you find the answer.
DeleteI do not know who you are referring to but I seem to cross paths every once in a while with this kind of people that leave people broken in their wake... and sometimes we make the worst of them to leaders.
ReplyDeleteLet's hope that we don't do it again.
DeletePowerful!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteWhat a venomous swag-belly! (Sometimes only Shakespeare can offer the right adjective!).
ReplyDeleteAgree!
DeleteWhat a fantastic opening salvo to this impactful piece … which I took as a extended metaphor to duplicity: a trait that seems to be growing like a plague. It seems that so few are able to see it (and, in fact, are hypnotized by it) … but having seen it … it cannot be unseen. Awesome writing, Magaly.
ReplyDeleteThe rate of growth is rather worrying.
DeleteYour words are always so cutting Magaly. Curiously with this one my mind drifted over to American politics and found it fitted that theme quite well!
ReplyDeleteClever boy...
Deletesign contracts
ReplyDeletewith the blood of shackled sheep - that is so vivid and perfectly written...
Thank you.
DeleteYou need to add a LOVE button. <3
ReplyDeleteYou say the sweetest things.
DeleteHow easy it is to be deceived by silver-tongued liars!
ReplyDeleteIt's a terrifying thought, isn't it?
DeleteOh. a double dealer. And so many have fallen for that silver tongue. Excellent write. I so enjoyed reading it, feeling it, embracing the truth of it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, JC.
DeleteOh, so much to sink one's teeth into here! Wonderfully written and thought-provoking. It is a wonderful thing to be awake and experienced enough to recognize the fakery in the shine. Sometimes a lonely power, yes, but protective and useful...and hopefull teachable.
ReplyDeleteMay the loneliness of this power become extinct.
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteThe heart and the gut always know. This is powerful and wonderfully spoken. This knocked me off my feet Magaly!!
ReplyDeleteMay the landing be soft.
DeleteI truly hope they still have some wits left. 🖤🖤🖤
ReplyDeleteI hope so, too.
Delete🖤❤️
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