Tara was the most
cunning huntress in her pride. Sharp clawed, strong backed, and charged with
the kind of agility that always got her jaws around a throat before her prey
could gurgle a bloody yelp. But today, Tara was just scouting.
She crouched low,
almost flat against the formerly rich soil that had been turned into wasteland
by the two-legged in stolen skins. In the past, her pride had laws forbidding
the hunting of the two-legged beasts. But food had gone scarce, and mothers had
to do unspeakable things to keep cubs from starvation.
The musky scent of
fear and old wool reached Tara’s nose before the bleating hit her ears. She sighed
in relief. She wouldn’t have to return home with the location of two-legged
young. She had grown not to mind bloodying her muzzle in meat that had threatened
her pride with sticks that spat burning stones. But their young were a
different matter. Feeding on them felt wrong. Young flesh did fill the belly, but it tainted
the spirit with the taste of sorrow and regret.
Tara focused on the
sheep that had limped some distance from the rest, she tensed her hind legs,
and pounced. But before she could reach her prey, her back and the top of her
head were smacked down by a heavy web that pushed her face and belly into the thirsty
dirt.
She roared, trying to rip the snare with her claws and teeth. But the thing just tangled tighter, crushing her ribs, stealing her breath. She struggled for some time, until she was finally able to stand under the net. Then a burning stone stung the side of her neck. Tara’s legs wobbled. Her eyes began to close. She tasted dust and her own blood before her whole world went dark.
photo by Jean Wimmerlin, on Unsplash
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the title echoes a favorite quote from Firefly: “No power
in the ‘verse can stop me!”
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for Poets and Storytellers United--Weekly Scribblings #69: Of the Hunt and Writers’ Pantry #70: Words for Healing.
This is sad, Magaly. Poor creature, more and more of them are being killed, mostly for their pelts/furs. I hope this one isn't the one we have had running loose, but now someone has it, hiding it.
ReplyDelete..
It is sad, indeed, and unforgivable.
DeleteIt is the way of Nature – which even includes us. We all have a right to eat (and carnivores have little choice but to kill to eat) and we all have the right to protect ourselves against predators. But I can't help worrying about her cubs.
ReplyDeleteI believe the same. Nature can be rather ruthless when it comes to survival. It's when survival is not involved that I get infuriated.
DeleteI mean, when the hunting has little to do with food.
DeleteThe struggle for "compassion" in this universe is never ending XXX
ReplyDeleteIndeed...
DeleteFunny how we almost never put ourselves inside the heads of those we stalk, herd, or pen up for food. You do that beautifully here Magaly, and add to the magnificence by creating a concept that carnivores have reservations about devouring their prey's youngsters. And I especially love how you get us thinking like her by describing the bullets as burning stones. Awesome write!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ron.. And I agree, if we could put ourselves in the heads of other living things, the world wouldn't be what is is.
DeleteOh the paradox, the paradox.
ReplyDeleteA gripping tale Magaly
Happy Wednesday
Much💚love
Thank you, Gillena.
DeleteOh dear, this was riveting and sorrowful. You did an admirable job of putting yourself in the mind of the hunter here!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bev.
DeletePoor Tara!
ReplyDeleteIndeed... 😔
Delete'the taste of sorrow and regret' ... too late. too late. Chilling prose, Magaly.
ReplyDeleteSigh.
DeleteI liked this from the perspective of the hunter who has herself been hunted. Really good read.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Debi.
DeleteIntriguing that a wild animal could feel a pause at killing a young human child - I'd like to think that is true. Hunted being hunted - it is the way of life and survival. Powerful writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Margaret.
DeleteWhat a great concept. This is very well written, and I like the gritty endind.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI'm enthralled. Looking forward to the next instalment!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lori.
DeleteThe title intrigued me, Magaly, being a Leo myself, and I enjoyed the picture you painted of Tara in the opening paragraphs – a formidable lion and mother. I love the way the simple phrase ‘musky scent of fear and old wool’ evokes the image of sheep. I was surprised by the twist in the tale, the ‘heavy web that pushed her face and belly into the thirsty dirt’, and hope that she can free herself.
ReplyDeleteWe shall hope together!
DeleteI feel a bit sad for Tara's cubs. But this is a brilliant and multifaceted to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteAnd oh, an interesting conversation you overhead at your doctor's. The one who proudly stated, "I’m always the one doing the hunting.”
reminds me of a Bantu proverb, which says the hunter who always comes home with meat is a thief...
The conversation creeped me out, too.
DeleteWhat with trophy hunters or wild animal fearful humans we really are terrible race to be on a planet with so much wildlife. We kill other creatures to eat or eliminate them just for disgusting pride. Sadly humans with a conscience are too few.
ReplyDeleteSad business, indeed...
Deletegripping scary and almost terrifying -a great narrative
ReplyDelete😔
DeleteI will wait until Tuesday and be back.
ReplyDeleteAnd then one more... :-)
Deletei loved the story told from the perspective of the lioness. Brilliant.
ReplyDeletei am sure Tara will be back in the next instalment.
And in the next...
DeleteI'm completely caught up too and worried about her cubs now! Really fined and earthy writing here.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen.
DeleteIt seams wrong to kill a creature of conscience when the two legged ones lack conscience.
ReplyDeleteI can't disagree.
DeleteOh, this hits me hard. Nature is what it is, and we humans so often complicate it. I too worry about her cubs.
ReplyDeleteWe are really good at complicating things, if it means getting what we want--regardless of how much doing so might hurt other creatures.
DeletePoor Tara. Wish she didn't have to go like that. When will the two-legged beasts stop preying on the four-legged ones.
ReplyDeleteWhen, indeed...
DeleteHappy Sunday Magaly
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by my blog today
Much💚love
🖤❤️
DeleteA wild woman in whichever form has got to do what it takes to protect the tribe and pride.
ReplyDeleteSo very true.
DeleteSo sad. Each species of adult has a fierce need to protect their young. Love this, Magaly.
ReplyDeleteIt's very sad, indeed...
DeleteI am so sorry Tara!!!!
ReplyDeleteBig Hugs!
You and me both... 😔
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