Love the storm.I am all lust without you.I am the love storm, all lustwithout you.Love, am I all lustwithout you—the storm?Am I all storm withoutthe lust you love?Without you, I am the lust stormall love.
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And I am all love for this poem! You clever girl, you.
ReplyDelete*slightly insane grins*
DeleteOh Magaly, this is just what I was hoping for! I adore your lust storm!
ReplyDeleteYay! Thank you so much for such a lovely prompt. It was so much fun, Kim.
DeleteWhat a treasure of a poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kerry.
DeleteSuch a passionate poem - I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joe.
Delete"How many times, how many ways must I tell you, and you not knowing or caring, 'I love you madly!'"
ReplyDeleteI like it, Magaly, words I could never resist. :)
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When it comes to certain words, "resistance is futile".
DeleteLust and love, two things to be grateful for at Thanksgiving!
ReplyDeleteAlways!
DeleteYou ARE the love storm!!
ReplyDeleteThunderous thank yous! 😁
DeleteThis is absolutely exquisite, Magaly dearest!❤️ I love the brilliance and ardor with which you penned each couplet .. especially; "Love, am I all lust without you—the storm?" Wow!!😍😍
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sanaa. So glad you think so.
DeleteI can see Mr. Piano Man, smiling.
ReplyDeleteYou have excellent sight then, lol!
DeleteI'd say you've done this challenge to a "T". I like the play of lust/lost.
ReplyDeleteLust was totally asking for it. 😁
DeleteA perfect storm of a poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Toni.
DeleteFantastically written!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteStrangely 'Lust' is a word that has got a negative publicity. Hopefully with sexy poems like this Magaly, it can recover some merit once again.
ReplyDeleteSocial (and often religious) interpretation of certain words are quite... frustrating, indeed. I join you in hoping things will get better.
DeleteWhat would blogging be without your lust? Delightful Magaly.
ReplyDeleteLess lusty? LOL! Thank you, Robin.
DeleteLove how you weave love/lust into many of your poems ... this gem sparkles!!!
ReplyDeleteWhen I read Kim's advice, about choosing words we liked and such, love and lust started howling, "Me! Me!" and I couldn't resist. I am so glad you like it, Helen.
DeleteOh I love how every couplet changes the mood... lika a complete saga of love (and of course lust)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Björn. I wanted to show movement (perhaps, even some growth). And I'm delighted that it seems to have worked.
DeleteLove, lust, storm...and may I add passion? Good one, Magaly!
ReplyDeleteYou certainly may.
DeleteI LOVE this!!!!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you do!
Delete🖤❤️
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