Last
week, I shared this Pratchett quote: “There should be a word for the microscopic
spark of hope that you dare not entertain in case the mere act of acknowledging
it will cause it to vanish, like trying to look at a photon. You can only sidle up to it, looking past it,
walking past it, waiting for it to get big enough to face the world.”
Then, I asked my Instagram friends to
share words that said “microscopic spark of hope” to them. These are some of
the words they shared: sideways gleam, breath, comfortably numb, democracy,
dormant, glimmer, glint, grace, growth, inkling, longing, seed, shimmer,
smidgeon, twinkle, wisp. The haibun that follows contains their words and
my feels.
I remember that day… when chaos
and anguish named themselves victorious, when temper ran fierily short and compromise
turned cryptid, when our dark and our bright couldn’t come together to birth a
twilight all could (or wanted to) be thrilled about. I remember feeling
a wisp of wonder, a glint of grace, a glimmer, a shimmer, a twinkle, a sideways
gleam of something… beautiful and free.
I remember asking, “What is that?
What is that dormant seed I see, that comfortably numb warmth spreading yum
through tongues and brains and feels? What is that?” I remember a garden of
voices answering, “That is your wish and mine kissing reality, that is a
smidgeon of democracy longing for more and better… for all.”
in our words,
a growing inkling
of wild hope
- for Poets and Storytellers United (Weekly Scribblings #45: Artistic Interpretation).
Let us fan the ember of that hope!
ReplyDeleteLet's!
DeleteThat is beautiful. I love "...a smidgeon of democracy longing for more..."
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lisa.
DeleteWonderful! I love this piece of writing, particularly the wording of haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary.
DeleteThat feeling is being felt all over the world. I am glad you wrote this piece Magaly.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Robin! And I am so happy the feeling is shared.
Delete(“That is your wish and mine kissing reality, that is a smidgeon of democracy longing for more and better… for all.”)
ReplyDeleteSuch gorgeous words
Happy Wednesday
Much💗love
Thank you, Gillena.
DeleteThis is an exquisite piece of writing, Magaly. It speaks for the legion who stood hours to cast their vote, longing for the cessation of chaos.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bev. I am glad it speaks those feelings.
DeleteWild hope brought to fruition is the best hope of all!
ReplyDeleteYes, it is!
DeleteThe wonderful depth of YOU shines thru loud and clear and infinitesimally great.
ReplyDeleteOf all of us. 🥰
DeleteI love where you gleaned the words for your haibun, Magaly, an interesting list, and how you wove them into it. I love the crisp vowels in ‘compromise turned cryptid’, which brought an image into my mind of Big Foot or Nessie trying to mediate dark and bright in order to ‘birth a twilight’. I also love ‘wisp of wonder’ and ‘sideways gleam of something’. My favourite of all is “That is your wish and mine kissing reality’.
ReplyDeleteYour favorite bit is my favorite bit. So thank you so much!
DeleteBeautiful writing Magaly, beautiful. Hope is a wonderful thing.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thank you, Anna. And yes, it is.
DeleteThis is neat, Magaly. I liked your compiled list that friends have given. Having "democracy" in our country seems to be threatened badly, and the election itself which could come to a cure is being threatened. Venezuela and some of the African countries have lost theirs. (My opinion, perhaps I should not have expressed it here. If so not, then please accept my apology and please delete my comment.)
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Your opinion is welcomed, Jim. I agree, the moment a US president starts to spread false information about our electoral process, the whole system is threatened. Hopefully, the upcoming administration and other levelheaded people will be able to undo the damage that individual has caused.
DeleteYes there is hope. Things are going to get better...
ReplyDeleteYes, they are...
Delete...we need them to.
DeleteBeautiful my friend!!! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteHug to you, my precious!
Deletewow this is beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteI feel it too. Finally a bit of bright light in the dark, bitter tunnel we've been walking through. Love this piece!
ReplyDeleteNow, let's feed the bright until everyone can see...
DeleteStunning piece of writing, Magaly. The haibun form worked well here. Just turn the wattage up on that tiny light.
ReplyDeleteYay!
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