not-quite Journaling, 15
the poetry:
Her heart can’t quit thinking,
anniversary:
celebration
of two halves
becoming
one whole.
When
his heartbeats don’t serenade her sleep,
something
rips the night apart—
the
sound of laughter
sprouts
like specters in the heart,
when her
love’s away.
When
thunder is the only music,
she remembers that
after
the
storm,
her
passion flowers
greet
clouds and sunlight
merrily.
And when
in darkness,
her love
remembers the moon.
and the inspiration:
I
suspect that most chronic illness warriors (and anyone who bares their teeth
at adversity over and over and over) can feel this quote all the way to
their bones (I sure do).
6/22/2021: All right, so “storm” might be a tad much. It was more like a rather enthusiastic cloudburst. Still, my passion flower is blooming beautifully, inviting bees and butterflies for a yummy snack. And since my Piano Man is away, visiting his parents, I appreciate the company and the scented cheer extra much.
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for Poets and Storytellers United--Writers’ Pantry #77: On Independence Day.
Yummy in all sorts of ways! And here's to your joyful reunion.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Rosemary!
DeleteWhat a treat to have you personalize your post today Magaly with flowers and your Piano Man.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you liked it, Robin.
DeleteGosh is it 7 years since that beautiful day???? And it was SUCH a beautiful day...as is every day he returns to you like a Bee to the Rose XXX
ReplyDeleteI can't believe it either. 7 years seem like forever and like no time at all.
DeleteSo much. I love the reminder that there is always hope, growth after the storm, the moon's light in darkness. Love the love. Strings are attached. My poem today is ultimately about living with a chronic health limitation.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of strings attached by choice. They feel like a promise, a link, something to grow together...
DeleteI truly enjoyed your poem, and felt it all the way to my achy bones.
DeleteBeautiful, Magaly! As always!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Debra.
Delete"And when in darkness,
ReplyDeleteher love remembers the moon."
The moon is always good for soothing absence in love
Read Pablo Coelho but i cant remember which novel that quote is from.
Happy Sunday
Much💜love
I've always thought of the moon as a great way to find connection when apart. It might be slightly cliché, but it's still true that whenever we look up we all see the same moon... no matter the distance.
DeleteThe quote is from Manuscript Found in Accra.
Love that true doesn't just ride out the storm, it dances in defiance of it to have a good story to share with the beloved when they reunite.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly does!
Deletelove the tender love poem you post today. and the title is a great quote in itself. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. ;-)
DeleteI love, I love all pieces in your not-quite Journaling, especially the inspiration (Paulo Coelho's quote) behind the first poem. Once again happy anniversary to you and your Piano man, dear Maga. I raise my glass to the beautiful couple. Celebration of love always inspires. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Khaya. I am so glad you like the quote and find the poem inspiring. If you ever read Manuscript Found in Accra, the origin of the quote, let me know how you like it!
DeleteThis post will go down in the 'these are a few of my favorite things' annals. Thank you, Magaly.
ReplyDeleteYou are most welcome, Helene. And thank you for telling me that. Now I am all smiles. 😁
DeleteAbsolutely gorgeous. The love expressed, from two halves becoming whole, to the whole of the moon. And the ribbon binds it all together. Congratulations to you and the piano man. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Lori!
DeleteMagaly , I love the picture of you and your piano man!Ribbons and the moon, all so deeply romantic and sacred! your poetry cuts me deep..because it is so beautiful and soulful..just like you!Your poems drip in the essence of you! I always feel shifted within after visiting your realm! Wishing you a sparkling week ahead..
ReplyDeleteAnd your words add magic to my ink, my sweetest Victoria. Thank you!
Deletei love that coehlo quote so much...
ReplyDeletexoxo
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I do, too.
DeleteI love your love poem and the pictures and "in darkness remember the moon."
ReplyDeleteThank you, Debi.
DeleteLovely photo quote and words.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rall. So glad you do.
DeleteIt's been 7 years already! Wow!!! This is all so beautiful!!! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteI know, right! It doesn't feel like it's been that long. And at the same time, it feels like we've been together forever.
DeleteA beautiful love poem. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jenna.
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